Wednesday, August 29, 2007

Looking Into Your Lifeless Eyes by:Demitri Christian Del Prado Sabug

Looking Into Your Lifeless Eyes
by:Demitri Christian Del Prado Sabug

Looking into youe lifeless eyes,
Cancels out my screaming cries,
I try I try as hard as I could,
All I do turns to no good,
Your lifeless eyes burn through me,
Into every good thing that there could be,
So I say to all of you,
Let me be what I think is true.
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Hey people,this was the very first person I wrote.I hope you like it.It was published inside a book called Imortal verses.It also was close enough in winning money in a contest.It was all thanks to poetry.com.I wrote many more poems.Go to poetry.com and put in my last name at the search.Type in Sabug at the last name part so just check my poems out.I got a couple more.I thank my best friend Porcher Hoppin for telling me about this and helped me become good at poetry.Thanks Porcher.And my friends for encouraging me.And especially my famuly,without them,i would never had my poem in that book.I love my family!!!

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Interesting to know.